Song

So I am writing a song now I cannot seem to finish it. I just dont think it sounds well.

Open your eyes
See what your missing
All of your life
Only one path was clear
But you will find that its not that easy
You Throw your dreams away
For something better, you were always
Wanting more, but you seem to have found that its easier to just hold on
Live another day, sleep another night,
What is right? You'll never know, if you just keep holding on.
Open your eyes
Do you believe just holding on will change your life to what you hope will happen
Only one life to live
So many things still to do
One more year and you think you will be there
Will you find it there Among the faces you have lost
Was it really worth the price?

Live another day, sleep another night,
What is right? You'll never know, if you just keep holding on.